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Monday, April 29, 2013

Editing Services

As I look to expand on the work I do and the help I try to give Indie Authors, I have decided that I will start offering Editing Services in June. What do I mean by editing services? Well quite simply, for a small fee, I will look over a sample of your work and offer feedback on the following topics:

1. Opening sentence
2. Plot and pace
3. Level of interest
4. Dialog
5. Show versus tell
6. Descriptive text
7. Characterization
8. Genre check
9. Grammar and spelling
10. General comments

Does this sound like something you might be interested in? Well, keep reading my blog over the next few weeks and watch out for upcoming announcements.

Have a great week!

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Sunday, April 28, 2013

Managing To Write When You Work A Full-Time Job


It can be very difficult to keep yourself motivated to write when your days are busy and all that’s left to you are a few hours of free time either at the beginning or the end. I know this for a fact.

For the past two years I have been working a full-time office job and trying to write novels in my 'spare' time. Of course, spare time is really a joke phrase. I leave home at 5:30am and get back around 4:30pm, so that really doesn't leave a lot of time to write as well.

But, if you're determined to write, then you must carve out a time for it. I used to be an early morning writer (5am to 6am), but that isn't possible for me now. So, I've become a late-afternoon writer (5pm to 6pm). Then on weekends I try and write a little more. Thankfully, because I plan my plots, I can write around 1,300-1,500 words in my allotted hour, and that usually leads to around 10,000 words a week. Oftentimes I don't know how I manage to fit everything else in. There's all the plotting, a little marketing, editing of other books, etc.. I won't say it's easy to write and work a full-time job, but it is possible. You just have to be determined.

So I was wondering, what do you all do, those of you who write while keeping a full-time job, to keep yourself motivated to write? I have my schedule and I try to stick to it, but it sometimes seems more than a job than my day job. Even my free times at weekends gets taken from me!

Oh well, I guess I’ll just have to suck it up and do the best I can. Who said being an author was easy?

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Saturday, April 27, 2013

Author Interview: Gregory G. Allen

Today I am pleased to present to you all the 64th in a series of Author Interviews. Recently I sat down with the teenage mutant ninja turtle acting Gregory G. Allen  and our conversation went something like this:


Paul:  I like to start my interviews by asking if you have any writing rituals?
Gregory:  I wish I could say that I have this really cool way of approaching my writing, but sadly I am one of those ‘when the moment hits me…I write’ type of people. I can actually write when people are even talking in the room just by blocking everyone out in the background.

Paul:  If someone had the power to step into your creative mind what would they see?
Gregory:  They would see a pretty messed up room. My brain can go all over the place when a storyline is coming into my mind. I usually see snippets of a story. Small moments that I then go and flesh out. I’m sure those snippets would completely frighten someone if they were seeing them in their raw form.

Paul:  Do you have a favorite character in each of your series, aside from the lead? If so, which one and why?
Gregory:  I’ve written stand-alone novels and at times, it’s the supporting players that I love. When I wrote Patchwork Of Me, I had a sassy character named Hahn that was no-holds barred in how she spoke. I love that she has no issues saying what is on her mind and makes no apologies for it. As a matter of fact, she has stayed in my head and told me she wants the sequel to be more about her.

Paul:  In all the years you’ve been publishing your work, what is the biggest mistake you made that you could share so others can avoid making it?
Gregory:  As authors, we want as many people as possible to find our work. And sometimes that means putting our money into the wrong marketing places. I spent much money my first time out on a publicist that unfortunately did not do reap much benefits. In hindsight; I shouldn’t have spent that kind of money when I am an unknown author.

Paul:  How do you find the time to write?
Gregory:  This is so difficult. Once we have a book out there, we spend so much time promoting it that getting back to writing is not always easy. When I’m feeling creatively charged, I make the time for writing. Usually at night time when I’m most creative.

Paul:  What is one thing you hope I do not tell the readers?
Gregory:  That Gregory carries himself as if he always knows what he’s doing, but many times it is all by the seat of his pants.

Paul:  Do you plot your stories or do you just get an idea and run with it?
Gregory:  The idea usually comes first and then I will sit down and create an outline. However, once I start writing – I always veer off from the outline as the characters really drive the story at that point.

Paul:  Do you do a lot of editing or do you find that as time goes on your writing is more fully-formed?
Gregory:  I write and then tend to go back and always self-edit when I read over again. However, in the end, I always use an editor before I ever submit my work anywhere.

Paul:  Do you have to do much research for your stories?
Gregory:  I tend to write many types of stories, so to make them authentic I do research. I want the places, occupations of characters, and storylines to ring as true as possible.

Paul:  What is your most recent book? Tell us a little about it.
Gregory:  Cool Side Of The Pillow tells the story of Zachery Kleinmann who lives in the elite world of New Canaan, Connecticut and left his accounting job four years earlier to be a modern stay-at-home father. But as his son is starting pre-school, his wife is passionately involved in her own career, and Zach is knocking on forty years old, he begins to wonder how he will find his own serenity and define himself moving forward.  Enter Ginger Charman, an older, eccentric, free living actress who has dedicated her life to bringing joy to children and keeping all those around her young at heart. As Zach is pulled into her world and discovers secrets about his new friend, he is not sure he'll ever be able to leave the rabbit hole once he has fallen through - or if he'll even want to venture outside of it again.

Paul:  What inspired you to write this book?
Gregory:  I spent many years as a children’s theater actor (even toured the country as a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle), so I thought writing a book that utilizes that setting could be interesting. People in the theater can be thought of to be wild and kooky and this older eccentric actress is just that. I also wanted to explore role reversal where the wife is out working, the man is at home; delve into marital issues; as well as the question of if men and women can be friends.

Paul:  Do you also write any poetry, non-fiction or short stories?
Gregory:  I’ve written a memoir novella about my half-brother that died when he was only 34 as well as a children’s book on autism awareness.

Paul:  Do you enter competitions? Are there any you could recommend?
Gregory:  I have done some of the Book Festival competitions and won those (New York Book Festival). Also the Reader’s Favorite competition was a great one that both one of my novels and my children’s book did really well in.

Paul:  How much marketing do you do for your published works or for your ‘brand’?
Gregory:  I find that I am always marketing. Social media. Reviews. Features. Blogs. I market everywhere that I can reach out to find new readers.

Paul:  What do you do when you’re not writing? Do you have any hobbies or party tricks?
Gregory:  I manage an arts center on a college campus and still dabble in theater. Sometimes performing or also reviewing shows and writing articles for BroadwayWorld.com When not doing that, I love to travel. And those travels sometimes turn up in my writing, so maybe that can be counted as research.

Paul:  That was wonderful, Gregory. I wish you every success for the future.


About Gregory G. Allen: Gregory G. Allen is the author of COOL SIDE OF THE PILLOW, PATCHWORK OF ME, PROUD PANTS: AN UNCONVENTIONAL MEMOIR, WELL WITH MY SOUL, and the children's book CHICKEN BOY: THE AMAZING ADVENTURES OF A SUPER HERO WITH AUTISM which won the People's Choice Grand Prize Award in the MeeGenius! Author Challenge. He has been in the entertainment business for over twenty years as an actor, director, producer, songwriter, playwright and author. Gregory contributes articles and blogs to several online sites including BroadwayWorld.com and Huffington Post.

Gregory's Blog: Gregory G. Allen
Gregory on Twitter: @GregoryGAllen
Gregory on Facebook: Gregory G. Allen
Gregory's latest book: Cool Side Of The Pillow (Amazon)

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Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Going Once, Going Twice...

I'm looking for beta readers!

First question, just what is a beta reader? For those of you who are not tightly bound to the writing industry, a beta reader is someone who, in turn for receiving an early copy of a book, agrees to check through it for inconsistencies, slow plotlines, grammar mistakes, etc., and then provide feedback to the author before the book is actually released.

If you have been following my blog, you will know that I have been busy writing. During the past couple of months I have been updating my blog with the plot and manuscript for NotDone, the first of my upcoming Sci-Fi series. Well, the manuscript is about ready to be let loose to a small portion of the public. Would you like to be one of those people?

If you say 'yes' I will send you an electronic copy and some instructions. Then you get to read the book a couple of times and make comments about it under several categories. Finally you return those comments to me. I then read through all comments from all my beta readers and make whatever changes I deem necessary to the book, before it undergoes a final edit. I will, of course, be publishing some of the beta reader comments on my blog. Sound interesting? Then drop me an email to john@pauldorset.com. I would love to find four or five beta readers during the next week.

Title:       NotDone
Genre:     Science Fiction
Launch:    June 2013

.Help
..Help!
…Please Help Us
….Everything is NotDone. 

In a desolate country ravaged by years of war, the dwindling inhabitants of Ameiza live in a segregated society where fertility has its special privileges. But for the lesser citizens of Talbot City, draconian rule means persecution or even death. Can five subjugated workers break free from the autocracy and fashion a better existence? Or will the politics of families from ages past stand in the way of unity and freedom?


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Monday, April 22, 2013

Ryann Reviews - A Touching Story

I was delighted to read a small article about my fantasy novella, Ryann, last week. The review comes from author Robyn Leatherman's blog, in an article entitled: AtoZ Challenge Day 18: R is for Ryann by Paul Dorset. Why not click the link and take a look at Robyn's wonderful blog?

To quote a very small piece of the article:
"Chapter 3 is where I was brought to tears out of my grief over losing a character I felt attached to. In this scene, a young slave girl (a sclava) is pleading with a younger sclava friend of hers not to pass on and leave her alone, and it left me in literal tears."
Readers' comments about books I've written always touch me in some way or another. Many, many thanks!

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Sunday, April 21, 2013

Writing Update 4/21/13

Last week I wrote a post all about the plotting process as I plan my next novel, Ryann's Brother. Well, the good news is that the plotting is nearly complete and I start writing the manuscript next weekend. One of the things I've done differently this time is to create a plot timeline in Excel. It's not something I've ever tried before but I was reading on a fellow author's blog about how they find it really helps keep holes out of plots. It was a fairly simple thing to create. I've put an excerpt of it below so you get an idea of how it works. In simple terms what it does is to track where each character in the book is at any particular time. It also helps to generate plot ideas. This is definitely something I will be using again.


The other thing I've been working on this week are the first edits to my upcoming Sci-Fi novel, NotDone. The book will be going out to beta readers later in the week and there's still time to get on the list if you want to. Just send me an email.

Well, that's about it for today. Busy times as usual. I'll catch you all later.

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Saturday, April 20, 2013

Author Interview: Venetia Lovelace

Today I am pleased to present to you all the 63rd in a series of Author Interviews. Recently I sat down with the fifty shades of grey wannabe Venetia Lovelace  and our conversation went something like this:


Paul:  I like to start my interviews by asking if you have any writing rituals?
Venetia:  A clean and clutter free work place, family out of the way for work, me in my pajamas with a cup of hot chocolate. Gets the creative juices flowing. Bliss.

Paul:  What types of books do you like to read? Who are your favorite authors? Why?
Venetia:  I love to read romance and more romance. Jane Austen is my favorite for her sweet romance, delicate sarcasm and gentle humor. Thomas Hardy fascinates me for the sheer sweeping power of his writing.

Paul:  If someone had the power to step into your creative mind what would they see?
Venetia:  Truckloads of beautiful people, cats and dogs, lots of fun, sex and romance all jumbled up.

Paul:  What is a typical day for you?
Venetia:  I send my husband to office, finish all the boring household stuff including breakfast and let the excitement of writing take over the solitude. A nap after lunch, evening walk with husband, shopping, dinner and some TV later, I come back to my best time of the day-writing, editing etc.

Paul:  In all the years you’ve been publishing your work, what is the biggest mistake you made that you could share so others can avoid making it?
Venetia:  I’m just a couple of months old in publishing. Haven’t realized my blunders yet. 

Paul:  How do you find the time to write?
Venetia:  I resigned from my teaching job to write. There’s lots of time between looking after the home and family. I do my thinking and organizing while cooking, walking or in bed until I fall asleep.

Paul:  What is one thing you hope I do not tell the readers?
Venetia:  That my real name is Poonam, and I am from India. The reason- I want international readership.

Paul:  If you are self-published, what led to you going your own way?
Venetia:  Self-publishing comes with a sense of freedom to write the way you want to. The restrictions imposed by publishers regarding the plot, the secondary characters, the length and the degree of explicitness do not apply here. It’s a great feeling to write the way you want to.

Paul:  Do you plot your stories or do you just get an idea and run with it?
Venetia:  It’s kind of both. I first get the idea. Then I make a loose plot which gets lost in the oblivion as my ideas highjack it.

Paul:  Do you do a lot of editing or do you find that as time goes on your writing is more fully-formed?
Venetia:  My editing takes place mostly in my mind, at least as regards the larger details of the story. But yes, I do go over the work a couple of times before putting it out there.

Paul:  What is your most recent book? Tell us a little about it.
Venetia:  My latest book is Only You Will Do. Obviously inspired by the runaway success of ‘Fifty Shades of Grey.’ The book is serious fun and a necessary sequel to the bestseller. For all those women who wish they were in Anna’s shoes. Why should Anna have all the fun? Simple ways of making Anna’s enviable sex life your own. I just had to write it because my fingers were itching to join in the celebrations of the success of Ms James’ books.

Paul:  What inspired you to write this book?
Venetia:  The tsunami of almost cult female following for the ‘Fifty Shades of Grey.’ Why not provide ways of weaving some of those shades in your own life? Isn’t it every woman’s secret desire?

Paul:  Do you enter competitions? Are there any you could recommend?
Venetia:  I enter competitions organized by Mills and Boon. My entries were selected in two of those. But the editing process is excruciatingly slow. My books are still being edited, after almost a year. The plus points- M&B are big, and fair and square.  

Paul:  How much marketing do you do for your published works or for your ‘brand’?
Venetia:  Not much. Just some on Facebook or twitter.

Paul:  What’s your favorite / least favorite aspect of your writing life? Has anything surprised you?
Venetia:  There’s nothing like being your own boss and not having your creative ideas mercilessly squashed, plagiarized or rehashed. Being the master of your universe is the best thing about writing. I’m surprised at myself- that I am a writer. Wow! 

Paul:  What do you do when you’re not writing? Do you have any hobbies or party tricks?
Venetia:  I read romance, watch romcoms and observe life and people, dogs and cats around me.

Paul:  Many thanks, Venetia. I wish you every success for the future.


About Venetia Lovelace: Venetia Lovelace majored in English Literature and worked as a senior English teacher until she resigned and discovered her real calling- being a full time romance author.

Venetia's Blog: not known
Venetia on Twitter: @dabaspoonam
Venetia on Facebook: Venetia Lovelace
Venetia's latest book: Only You Will Do (Amazon)

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Friday, April 19, 2013

Looking For Volunteers - Would You Like To Be A Beta Reader?

This is my second request of the week!

First question, just what is a beta reader? For those of you who are not tightly bound to the writing industry, a beta reader is someone who, in turn for receiving an early copy of a book, agrees to check through it for inconsistencies, slow plotlines, grammar mistakes, etc., and then provide feedback to the author before the book is actually released.

If you have been following my blog, you will know that I have been busy writing. During the past couple of months I have been updating my blog with the plot and manuscript for NotDone, the first of my upcoming Sci-Fi series. Well, the manuscript is about ready to be let loose to a small portion of the public. Would you like to be one of those people?

If you say 'yes' I will send you an electronic copy and some instructions. Then you get to read the book a couple of times and make comments about it under several categories. Finally you return those comments to me. I then read through all comments from all my beta readers and make whatever changes I deem necessary to the book, before it undergoes a final edit. I will, of course, be publishing some of the beta reader comments on my blog. Sound interesting? Then drop me an email to john@pauldorset.com. I would love to find four or five beta readers during the next week.

Title:       NotDone
Genre:     Political Sci-Fi
Launch:    June 2013

.Help
..Help!
…Please Help Us
….Everything is NotDone. 

In a desolate country ravaged by years of war, the dwindling inhabitants of Ameiza live in a segregated society where fertility has its special privileges. But for the lesser citizens of Talbot City, draconian rule means persecution or even death. Can five subjugated workers break free from the autocracy and fashion a better existence? Or will the politics of families from ages past stand in the way of unity and freedom?


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